首先我们来介绍下这位同学的具体情况：
复旦大学 软件工程学士
GPA:2.96/4.0 TOEFL/IELTS:91 GRE/GMAT:316+3.0
录取项目
纽约大学 信息系统硕士
佛罗里达大学 计算机科学硕士
波士顿大学 计算机信息系统硕士
New York University Master of Information Systems
University of Florida M.S. in Computer Science
Boston University M.S. in Computer Information Systems
申请故事
初次见面，这位同学给我们留下的印象非常深刻。他坐在小圆桌对面，和我们聊文书的素材。他是我见过最和蔼可亲的学生了，全程保持微笑，非常温和，回答经常是：“好的老师。”头脑风暴结束之后他站起来，我们的印象更加深刻了——这位同学非常高，超过190公分！
他的经历也让我印象深刻：虽然GPA不高，但是软件开发的实践经历丰富，且有一年工作经验。工作期间也是表现卓越成就满满。另外，他在校的时候还开启过一个支教公益项目，而且他自己目前还和其他合伙人经营着一家公司。怎么能让GPA埋没了这样一个才智丰富的人呢？一定要帮他申请到好学校！这是我们的信念。
这位同学接受了关于文书的建议：开头一定要强调GPA，说明自己远比GPA优秀。事实证明，这样的文书思路卓有成效。
在面试佛罗里达大学的时候，正赶上中国冠状病毒盛行大家隔离在家。他坚持真实地以隔离在家的状态（穿着睡衣），面对佛大的面试官。不过这样出其不备的招数，其他申请人还是要谨慎使用……
其中一个项目的招生官对他说：“我很欣赏你。”但并没有录取他。东方不亮西方亮，最终佛大的计算机项目录取了他。和这位同学的合作非常愉快，成就感满满！相信他也有同样的感受。
文书高光段落
Although my general GPA is 2.9, I built a well-functioned Monopoly Game soon after college study began, before which time I didn’t receive any trainings on programming. In fact, very few students were able to complete such game development on the freshman year, even though some had studied programming in high school. But through industrious self-learning in college, I quickly surpassed others in programming and developed the game. Although my GPA is not attractive, I brought about the idea and led a team of students to successful development of an innovative immersive vocabulary memorizing system based on Visual Reality technology, which was highly rated by professors from Fudan University, and University College Dublin; I excellently completed important software development tasks for my company Banma Network Technology, when I was only an intern, and then made significant contribution to major development projects after becoming a regular employee. Despite many software development projects in the university, I was an active role in many student associations, I still spared time to listen to my classmates carefully, accompanied them when they encountered great psychological barriers. Indeed, my care for classmates won me many sincere friends. Besides, in Software School of Fudan, I initiated a voluntary teaching at Yunnan province, and preserved the long-term cooperation between the university and the primary schools in Yunnan. I hope the GPA of 2.9 would not become a label for me, but that you notice my high proficiency in programming.
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